No Reflections – Excerpt from Chapter 1

  No Reflections is the book that I am working on for NaNoWriMo (a month where authors are challenged to write 50k words) It is a Gothic vampire romance story set in the 1860s full of vampires, hunters, dark settings, and of course blood 😉 Reminder: This is a first draft, and is an exclusive…

Blood Type R – Chapter 21 Excerpt

Hey there everyone! Here is the excerpt!! This is the beginning of chapter 21. This may still need a last minute edit, so bear with me on any errors! Should be out in a few days! 🙂   Ludovic mindlessly toyed with the long strip of leather that was in his hands. He had carried…

When Using Vagueness Just Becomes Confusing

I think we have all been there. We read a story and end up reading passages more than once, just to make sure that we understand what’s going on. And when we finally think we do, the narration states something that contradicts what we thought we understood. To put it simply – it’s just, vague….

Blood Type R – Chapter 18 Excerpt

For those just stumbling on here, Blood Type R is a werewolf romance story found on Wattpad Hello readers! I have decided, in conjunction with my general blog, to have a section dedicated to excerpts from my stories! I figured it would be a fun thing to do for my readers that follow the story!…

An Example of Sensory Details

Last time I checked, most readers do not live in a void. They live with their five senses, six if you count thoughts. It is crucial to include these in your story. Below I will go over the senses briefly and then provide examples. Sense 1: Sight This one is obvious and very hard not…